Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Reflection for White Knight VS Black Knight

This is a reflection in language B about a story called White Knight VS Black Knight. I made from GarageBand. I learnt a lot of stuff such as what is the different between reading a story and telling a story.

The different between reading a story and telling a story is that if you read a story you don’t use any expression and you don’t change your voice. If you tell a story to other people you have to use an expression and change your voice. The important things to remember when telling a story is that you should use an expression and you have to change your voice. I think that I was a little bit not successful doing the podcast because it was hard recording my voice with an expression. It took me 2 weeks to get this done and I think I am a little bit doesn’t like because most of them doesn’t have any expression because it was a hard for me to do it.

It was difficult for me when I am recording my voice from GarageBand because it was hard changing my voice and to express myself. I think my podcast have a voice that is like I was reading on it and some of them almost sound like I am telling a story. It was hard for me to sound like I am telling a story because I don’t want to be embarrassed and being silly. I still don’t know what to do to make it easier for me.


It was easy for me when I am writing the script for the story because there are picture to help me what to write. I enjoy when I was writing the script for the story because it was easy and it also have picture to help me what to write. I didn’t enjoy when I was recording my voice in GarageBand because I don’t like to be silly, embarrassed and shouting.


Monday, November 22, 2010

White Knight VS Black Knight







Once upon a time, in a city there was a white knight who was protecting the city from danger. One day while he was searching for his dog, he shouted, “Where are you dog?"  When the small brown dog heard the white knight calling him, he came.

The white knight asked the dog to find the black knight, because the black knight killed lots of gorillas, sharks and bulls. The black knight liked to kill these animals because he sold or ate them. This was a big problem for the town because these animals were almost extinct.

The dog used his nose to find the scent of the black knight.  When the dog found the scent, it walked and the white knight followed.

Meanwhile when the dog was searching for the black knight, the black knight got his weapons and horse.  After he got his weapons and horse he searched for a gorilla, a bull and a shark. The first animal he wanted to kill was a gorilla.  So he searched for it.

The black knight growled, "Show yourself gorilla!"  The gorilla appeared from the bush. The black knight grumbled "I challenge you to a fight."  The gorilla agreed by nodding its head, but he was soon killed. After defeating the gorilla, the black knight chopped off its head and continued his journey until he found a bull.

When he found a bull, it looked like it was going to charge him, so he called his horse. Using his sword, he charged the bull and the bull did the same thing.  The black knight hit it on the head and was able to kill the bull. After the fight, he continued his mission, which was to find the shark.

Upon arriving on the shore, he rode a fast boat to the middle of the deep blue ocean. When he met the shark, the black knight shouted, "I challenge you to a battle." The shark nodded his head willingly. Soon the fight began, it was so hard for the black knight to defeat the shark because it was too fast and quick, but he killed it anyway. When he arrived on shore he met a little boy.

The boy made fun of the knight and laughed, " You look weird and dirty like mud." The black knight got angry with the little boy and growled at him, “I am going to kill you.” The black knight took and used his arrow to try and kill the boy. The black knight was the most evil man in the land. Every body hated him. That is why the white knight had to stop him.

He got ready to fire but the boy ran away, but suddenly the boy slipped and fell. The white knight came just in time to rescue the boy. The white knight ran very quickly and used his shield to protect the boy from the arrow.

The arrows hit the white knight's shield and the black knight took his axe and attacked the white knight while the boy hid himself behind a tree and watched them fighting. The black knight asked, "You will never defeat me!”

The white knight answered, "Of course I will!”
 “But first I am going to ask you a question, why do you kill the animals?” questioned the white knight.
 “I kill them to sell them or eat them and now since you followed me you will die here!” growled the black knight. Then grabbing his long sword, the black knight called his horse and rode on it. The black knight charged towards the white knight and the white knight used his sword and shield to protect himself.

The black knight fell on the ground and ran towards the boy to kill him and the white knight ran after him. The boy stood still because he was frightened and the black knight was near him.  The boy thought he would die.

The white knight came to rescue him and the fight continued.  He used his sword to knock down the enemy.  The white knight said, "Do you give up?” The enemy gave up and the white knight brought him to jail. Before the white knight left the jail the black knight said, “Watch out when I get out from jail!"

When he put the black knight in jail, he continued to fight dragons that would attack the city. After fighting and killing all the dragons the city became peaceful again and lived happily ever after.

THE END

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